I hate to be the bitchy person, but as the protocol mod, I must commence...
I know that we all have different styles of writing. I, for one, like reading the different styles because it gives a literary face to each character. However, it appears as if not everyone understands how the RP comm works. So, a tutorial is in order. Lucky for you they're free!
Firstly, when posting in your character's private journal, it is to be written as a journal. Same as when you update your journal. You just talk about stuff that you did, what you're going to do; it is reported in the past and future tense, uless you are saying "I'm feeling this, that, and the eggroll I had for last night."
Secondly, please don't double post. Physical interactions of characters take place in [Bad username: secret_chamber>, questions about characters, policy, timeline, random announcements and anything else go in here (<lj user=]), and your characters reactions, thoughts, journal, etc. goes in the journal of your character (i.e. _mcgonagall_m).
Thirdly, when posting in [Bad username: secret_chamber> for physical interactions between characters, please write in third person format. This makes is easier to read and provides some semblance of uniformity to the comm. I'm all for individualism, but seeing everything all nice and neat makes me happy (there's a reason my nickname is Hermione, you know). Please refer to <a href=]Minerva and Moody's Interactions</a> for an example if needed. (Yes, a shameless plug for my two favorite characters, I know.)
Other than that, kudos for the frequent updates, great job on the RPing, have fun, keep your noses clean, and I love you all very much. Any questions, please feel free to comment or IM me (see <lj user="_mcgonagall_m> userinfo for that).
Thanks for reading!